标题: 张悉妮:《童言无忌三国志中英文对译本》第一回英文本, 《童言无忌三国志中英文对译本》第一回英文本
性别:男-离线 鄉侯彥希

白衣伯爵太中大夫

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发表于 2003-11-17 00:16 资料 主页 文集 短消息 看全部作者
中译英是很难。我看到不少文法上的错误。和你改了一些,但不敢多改。如悉妮需要我的帮忙可以说一声。   




chapter 1: clamorous, after you sing i will get on stage, all make cloth for others
---prelude

the house with an old mulberry tree must have a king
liu bei’s uncle

when liu bei was five, he sit under the old mulberry tree in the garden to play the emperor, he tell his friends to knee in front of him to be his ministers. he also says: “i am the emperor; you all have to knee in front of me.” at the end, he got spanked by his mom.

liu bei’s mother is a non-educated single mom, she is afraid liu bei become a rebel when he grows up.

when i was young, i liked playing the emperor game, too. i used the sheet as the emperor’s robe, and used the bed as my territory. i considered the king sized bed was big enough to be a country. i used all my toys to be the ministers, including my white teddy bear. However, my mom just laughing when she saw that.  She patted gently on my big head and said : “silly baby, your head was too big that caused me a hard time in labor.” i was thinking afterwards, the reason that my mom didn’t spank me was mainly because she was not a single mom or maybe she had a good husband. so i decided to be like mom, when i grow up i will find a good husband too and never spank my kids -- to be a good mom.

i heard that it violates the law if you spank kids in United States, you will be sent to jail and will lose the kid’s custody. this is no joke, you can’t even do guasha(1) , but that is some one else’s business.

but liu bei is not afraid of being spanked by his mom, still do what ever he wants.

finally, his uncle saw his ambition to be an emperor and his uncle thinks that he has the look of an emperor, not a normal kid. his uncle tells his mom to educate him, whichstarts liu bei’s study life. it seems that if you want to be like liu bei, but don’t have a dad, at least you need an uncle who is able to tell good from bad. there has to be a decent man in a family. However, liu bei doesn’t studying. He always stare blankly in class. his teacher is lu zhi who is very straightforward and good-natured. he later becomes the general of assault. lu zhi is a very strict teacher, but he is careless sometime. one time, lu zhi tells liu bei to read the book but he falls asleep. liu bei then stealthily takes out a zhongzhi from his desk and starts eating. then lu zhi wake up, the only thing liu bei can do is stay there and giggle.


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性别:男-离线 鄉侯彥希

白衣伯爵太中大夫

Rank: 9Rank: 9Rank: 9
组别 白衣卿相
级别 安国将军
好贴 1
功绩 208
帖子 834
编号 44
注册 2003-8-21
来自 五湖


发表于 2003-11-17 01:03 资料 主页 文集 短消息 看全部作者
我不是照片上的那个可爱的女孩。她是香港歌手。

悉妮不要如此客气。。。我会很害怕的   我可以帮忙去修改。对文法规则我会在行些,但我不是英文写作高手(我的老师们常说我的文章文法规则没有错,但Style却不好,超级致命伤,导致我的英文成绩差  ),所以中英文对译我只会害了你那么好的一篇文章。真的。  

我比较惊讶的是,为何出版社不找人代为翻译?  

悉妮的英文本的限期是何时?

QUOTE:
那本是官本位制度和计划经济下计划教育的或者极端的国家极权教育的产物,当教育成为产业,为生产所需,相信情况就会根本改变。

这句,我试找人帮忙翻译一下。这句不太可以直译,因为有一些较特别的名词。


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