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2009-9-25 12:10 洋过
七绝水一首

依韵灌水:

[size=3]腐败多年不现痕,何时监狱已开门?
钱财美色皆成梦,回首青楼直掉魂。
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[img]http://www.zhgysc.com/images/post/smile/2/em07.gif[/img]

2009-9-27 17:51 右文
過於直致則寡味:titter:

2009-9-27 17:53 凉珠
[quote]原帖由 <i>洋过</i> 于 2009-9-25 12:10 发表<br />
依韵灌水:<br />
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腐败多年不现痕,何时监狱已开门?<br />
钱财美色皆成梦,回首青楼直掉魂。<br />
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<img src="http://www.zhgysc.com/images/post/smile/2/em07.gif" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor='hand'; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open('http://www.zhgysc.com/images/post/smile/2/em07.gif');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /> [/quote]<br />
鄙视楼主,色鬼一个。<img src="images/smilies/dry.gif" smilieid="7" border="0" alt="" />

2009-10-5 00:27 车夫
能回首青樓者,PFPF!:titter:

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